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Question: Tri-gee#6, Dare I ask readers comments please again!?
From the woods---he strays, stouthearted
the black cat--------lurks
in the bushes-------patiently
with ears ajar-------in statuette stillness
hour upon hour-----and then!
moving-----------quickly pounces
like a panther--------feathers fly
he hunts---------------he feasts
prey unknown-------I watchWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The trigee anon meetings will be starting next month!. You will be a charter member!. lol So how about a trigee tripled!?
Jenny!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.very!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.nice
excellent,!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.easily!.!.!.!.!.!.!.read
flows!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.superb,!.!.!.!.!.!.kudos!
Besides it is probably raining where you are at!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This reminds me of a cat I used to own, by the name of Rogue!. He was never much good at hunting birds!.!.!.frogs were his speciality!. Thanks for the poem and the memories!. You are rockin' the trigee!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Great work - I saw every image - the cat came out in 3-D ;-) ?
p!.s!. Neonman - what are you doing!?!? Here comes another art form!. !!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
An outstanding Trigee!. A video in words!. Extra special!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's awesome! I can see everything, and where some kinds of these poems don't quite connect, this is perfect! Keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Fantastico!Www@QuestionHome@Com
i witness this every day and it happens just as you say!. very goodWww@QuestionHome@Com
left stanza is good, right stanza is good, both stanzas are great! Way to go!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
When is someone going to tell me what a trigee is!? Great work by the way!Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like it but what is the criteria for a tri-gee poem!?Www@QuestionHome@Com