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A schedule !. !. !. !. !. for the day I die
of emotions !. !. !. !. !. I can write,
should be kept !. !. !. clearly and
in pencil !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. unfixed
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A schedule !. !. !. !. !. for the day I die of emotions !. !. !. !. !. I can write, should be kept !. !. !. clearly and in pencil !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. unfixed *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Don't know what I'd do w/o my eraser!. This is clever!Www@QuestionHome@Com You seem to be establishing a pattern: the first part is intensely powerfully and tautly written; the second is a shade more relaxed in style, and has a hint of ambiguity; the union is considerably weaker!. But this whole trigee idea is worth exploring!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This, surely, is not a lumpy one!? That's how I like them: to the point!. They should be minimalistic and not verbose!. (From The Tricky Art of Trigee, by T!. D!. Euwaite, 2008)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com With pencil, you can always erase!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well, like gravy, sometimes you get lumps, but it still tastes good!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Lumpy!? No!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Wonderful!?!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Yes! nfd ?Www@QuestionHome@Com sometimes i enjoy how youll make the question so things posts!. haha! because im a pencil freak i like this one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Lumpy!? What did I miss!?Www@QuestionHome@Com |