*****
I breath you in !. !. !. !. with a sigh
I hold you in !. !. !. !. !. a part of me
I keep you in !. !. !. !. !. !. disguises
I am blinded !. !. !. !. !. !. !. with lies
*****Www@QuestionHome@Com
Question Home |
Position:Home>Poetry> Everyone is doin' some happnin' Trigees. Is this one good?Question: Everyone is doin' some happnin' Trigees!. Is this one good!? *****
I breath you in !. !. !. !. with a sigh I hold you in !. !. !. !. !. a part of me I keep you in !. !. !. !. !. !. disguises I am blinded !. !. !. !. !. !. !. with lies *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Wow!. This one really works well!. Note here you never commented on MY Trigee!. I was depressed all day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Thank you, it is nice to read a trigee just before going to sleep!.!.!. I like this one very much!. I have been blinded with lies myself quite a few times!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com i really like this!. all 3 poems perfect!. you can even play with it!.!. Reenie try changing the last line and play it to-(just a thought) 'i am whole!.!.!.!.!.!.!.with your love' this trigee idea has some room to be interactive with it too i think!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I love the Trigee, but I hate the last line!.!.!. Hugs sent your way and "new-form" to stay!.!.!. Gotta shut down it's strorming again See ya in the morn!Www@QuestionHome@Com Absolutely breathtaking trigee and message!. You and Semper can fight over the head table now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Lies have blindsided all of us at one time or another, but never has it been expressed like this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I agree with your I's and I give you an aye that's a good one! Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Nah! IT'S GREAT!!!! Euwaite and see, dude!Www@QuestionHome@Com Nice ending, I wasn't expecting that!. Great Trigee!Www@QuestionHome@Com Are you joining our "anon Ttigees meetings" Yes, Very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This one is great !!! As I've enjoyed them All !.!.!.!.!.Thank You This one has a lot of truth in it!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.A LOT OF TRUTH!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com |