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Question: Perhaps a trigree tripled!?
Night times hold magic
Nightime loving!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.play me a song!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.satin dancing
warming embrace!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.softly moving!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.drum beats primal
passion brewing!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.loving's coming!.!.!.!.!.!.!.as fire flames
sunrise can wait!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.bodie's entwining!.!.!.!.!.!.!.nighttime loving!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The Triple Trigee!.!.!.!.skies save me! This is excellent, a must see for TD!. Great poems too, very scintillating and erotic!.!.!.makes me happy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is stunning!. I love it -- I love the multiplicity of meanings and linking with your work!. Wonderful play with the words!.
I love it!.!.!. Took me into a lite creative crafting with your masterpiece -- forgive me!.
T!.
Try this: Takes you back to the first!.!.!.
and other formats -- sheer genius!!
Nightime loving!.!.!.!.
softly moving
as fire flames
sunrise can wait
play me a song
drum beats primal
passion brewing
bodies entwining
satin dancing
warming embrace
lovings coming
nighttime loving
Nightime loving
softly moving
passion brewing!.
sunrise can wait!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Show-off! :)
By George, he's got it! great work!.!.!.!.I think I shall take a back seat on these, I'm still working on that damn Sestina!.
(bodies entwining)!.!.!.you don't need the possessive here!.
(unless you mean - the entwining which belongs to the bodies!.!.!.in which case it would be bodies' entwining)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Know---you---now
I----plead---truce!
Three--no-----way
no----way---three!
LoL! my brain is taxed! I was in thought you'd come up with a winner long before this!. These flames are burning up the screen! "Three" Wow! Bravo!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I am speechless, probably for the first time in my life!. Brilliant! (For "bodie's," read "bodies")!.
Addition: After this, I may never write again!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Something is not quite right!. I am wondering could you write a Trigee-Rondo-Retourne with an Etheree twist next time please !? ;-) lol beautiful and triply skilful!
Trigee-nomotry rocks!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is brilliant! I haven't even tried the double yet and you've already mastered a triple!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Unorthodox skill my friend! Kudos!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Unothdoxically, fantastical!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
whoa, goose bumps!. excited!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That's hot!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow! This is great!
Did you get TD's permission to triple!?
I'm sure he will love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com
We'll have it like Rubik's Cube before long!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Super!. I shall catch my breath now !.!.!. 3x !!!Www@QuestionHome@Com