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I run free, with a pronounced limp,
as fast as my walker will carry me!.
I gallop among with the motionless
while the clock should have
its second hand removed…
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I run free, with a pronounced limp, as fast as my walker will carry me!. I gallop among with the motionless while the clock should have its second hand removed… *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "Among with!?" That is ghastly!. "With" is inherent within the sense of "among!." This is known as a pleonasm and is therefore unnecessarily redundant and needlessly superfluous!. Without this single glaring lapse of standards, this is a little gem, superb in concept and in execution!. The Board is going to hear about this one, buster!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Gallop along!? With "along", it is actually my favorite line!. Very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Powerful! You show the joy of the mind so easily!. Another branch of your famous talent, my friend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Unfortunately, no, I'm ready for many more jaunts into verse!. But I won't bore you!. Cute poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Poor thing! You need to relax in free verse!. Problem is no verse is really free!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, but from the neck up, is what slows me down!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Haha! Me too! I think it's nap time!.!.!. Fun poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com frazzledWww@QuestionHome@Com Love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com I'm exhausted from reading it !!!!!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Well DoneWww@QuestionHome@Com Sounds like you're talking about my limp again! I'll crutch my way to mars!Www@QuestionHome@Com |