A Rondelet per Gran'et...the rulebook said I could slightly alter the refrai

Question: A Rondelet per Gran'et!.!.!.the rulebook said I could slightly alter the refrains!. Is it OK!?

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Kaleidoscope
our colors geometrically,
Kaleidoscope
rendering the crystalline slopes
tones and hues fantastically,
Orange green-blue elastically
Kaleidoscoped…

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Very colorful!. Kaleidoscopes give me migraines!.!.!.I now leave for my Excedrin!.!.!.thanks TD!.

=) just kidding!. The poem was wonderful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

TD - what do you mean the rulebook said!? What rulebook!? All right, I'll let you have the 'd' 'cos you're the Boss!.

I am waiting with baited breath (what a silly expression) for more gems like this!. (now back to my sestina)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Kaleidoscope colors are always worth watching!. Thank you for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have been very mathematical lately!. Yes, it is very colorful math!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This was very colorful indeed!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Irrespective of the style and the rule-book, this is a very lyrical piece!. (Line 4 hurt my tongue!. )Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this!. It shapes up well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Darn it!. Now I've got a black ring around my eye!.!.!.
Thanks a lot!Www@QuestionHome@Com