Is this a Euwaitian Trigee?

Question: Is this a Euwaitian Trigee!?

On the Water: A Euwaitian Trigee
by Elaine P

On the ocean!.!.!.!.!.With my love
Swiftly sailing!.!.!.!.!.O'er the waves
Dolphins follow!.!.!.Lightly leaping
Singing songs!.!.!.!.Hearts ablaze!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I believe it is! Good job!.!.!.beautiful image!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's the spirit!. The two pieces can be complimentary or contradictory!.

I learned this by accident!. I was reading Valkyrie lyrics with a big split in the middle of each line!. The sections almost made little poems themselves!.

I don't know if this has been done before!. I have about 10 of them, so far!. I have much catching up to do, including sending merchandise to people who have been waiting for a month!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes I believe it is---here is my first attempt!.Let me know if I got it,I've never tried this before,bear with me!.

Campfire Nights

Bonfire warm upon my hands----marshmallows turning golden
Light from the fire in his eyes----turning oh so hot
Is the bonfire too hot------Will something get burned
Have to turn down the heat----Before I get a chance to savourWww@QuestionHome@Com

My head hurts!

my head hurts!.!.!.!.!.I try this style
while doing this!.!.!.!.!.I just might die
do i praise!.!.!.!.!.It is so good
do I dis!.!.!.!.!.should I just try

Do you have any idea how hard it is to get any semblance of logic out of this while trying to rhyme!?

I like this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Super Elaine! You've mastered TD's new Trigee!. It is a beautiful poem!. I like the dolphins following, singing songs!. And your heart swelling with love!. Well done!. This is a keeper!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Trigee morning I see!. Watch the waves as you seem to have a trough between your crests, trigee induced of course! Nice one, as usual!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I do believe you've got it! And done it very good too!
Good morning!Www@QuestionHome@Com

What ever it's birth, It is lovely! on either side!. Kudos!Www@QuestionHome@Com