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Position:Home>Poetry> Rate this?Question: Rate this!? I Am One of a Kind
Sunshine is illuminated from my heart Music flows from my soul I am a lover of life But sometimes I just want to get away When life has passed its tolerable degree I look for that special place I find it within me I’m just a bird Who’s wings are clipped Who cant wait to soar Over land and sea One of a kind Meant to be free Always a twinkle in my eye One of a kind No one like me Head held high Meant to just be MEWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: it's a great poem, actually!. I would rate it 9/10!. I like the ending where it said "meant to just be Me!." I like how you put the "ME" in another line than in the same line!. It really made sort of an impact on me as a reader!. It made me remember it well and it sort of grabbed my attention, too! It's great!!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com It is a set of very nice expressions about yourself!. As "true" poetry it is good for one of the first dozen attempts, but it's quality diminishes if you have been writing for awhile!. Glad you think so well of yourself!. Keep it up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com 8!.2/10 beautiful!. loved it!. this is mine!. if i could be any part of you i would be your tears to be concieved in your heart born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips LoveWww@QuestionHome@Com i thinks that this poem is very beautiful and soulful and will become very popular one dayWww@QuestionHome@Com i give you a big 10 1st its original 2nd its what every1 wants to be 3rd your talent for words---keep at it by all means----Www@QuestionHome@Com 7!.5/10 great poemWww@QuestionHome@Com Its ok I guess!. I like the end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com 4/5 or 8/10 - GREATWww@QuestionHome@Com Yeah all rightWww@QuestionHome@Com its pretty good!. if i was rating 1-10 i would say 8!.Www@QuestionHome@Com dat was really cool! B+!Www@QuestionHome@Com Between 1-10 i give it a!.!.!.!.!.8!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com with 1 being the worst and 10 being the best i give it a 10 you are an amazing poet!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it!.!.it is nice and the words are rhyming and they make sense!. They aren't just there because the rhyme!.Www@QuestionHome@Com THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!! omg ur sooooo good how long did it take u to write that and can u write me one!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Your feelings in the poem were extremely good!. I also give the rating for the poem as 8 out of 10!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |