Will my little niece like this poem?

Question: Will my little niece like this poem!?

I want her to grow up loving poetry!. She's just 3 months old!.

Riding to Mars
by Aunt Elaine P

Can you ride a horse to Mars!?
Sure, if it grows wings!
We’ll hitch it to our magic cart
And pack up all our things!.

In our horse-drawn cart we’ll fly
‘Way up to meet the stars
We’ll pass the Moon and we’ll say ‘hi’
Then we’ll go on to Mars!.

On Mars we’ll see a golden dome
Where poets write and sing
It’s the place we’ll call our home
Which poem will YOU bring!?

How about this one!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Your neice will want to go with Aunt Elaine to Mars!. You described such a lovely flight - all little girls love horses! She will feel special that this is 'her poem'!. You wrote it in a manner that both children and adults can enjoy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

for a little girl, sure!. I mean, i dont think its good enough to get published or anything (sorry) but for ur niece, i think it'll do!. especially if you add cute pictures!.
I'm not so crazy about the 2nd stanza, but the rest is great!.
I think its really cute that you want your niece to love poetry like you do (or so i'm assuming)!.
:-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is beautiful!. I look forward to seeing your niece on Mars someday!. With an aunt as talented, beautiful, and imaginative as you, she cannot help but arrive!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

She's lucky to have such a loving aunt!. I think all children respond naturally to poetry!. With you to give her support she will grow up to be at home with words!. This may be the best gift a person could have!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pegasus with magic cart!.!.!.sounds like a 69 chevy with overdrive! lol Lovely poem!. " Would you like to ride in my beautiful balloon" should be the melody to this!. Compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Most definitely, sounds like a wonderful place!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think a little girl will love its creativity!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's beautiful and creative -- should delight her -- draw the pictures to go with it, and you'll have a book!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh that's good! You've written the things which grab a child's curiousity and sense of the fantastic and magical!
I love it!.!.!.I'm a kid at heart!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Aww it`s cute!. Really nice for a kid and her Auntie wrote it That will sure catch her attentionWww@QuestionHome@Com

She'll probably go around singing it when she is old enough, and knows it was written just for her!.
Beautifully done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awwww I want to go,--can I bring one of my poems too!!!
She is gonna love that poem---lucky little girl!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Maybe by the time she is grown - there really will be a place on Mars!. ;-) Nay - no way!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes it is adorable, But I bet you will have a book full, before
she is old enough to enjoy! with pictues too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thanks from the kid in all of us!.She will love it!.How lucky is she to have such a creative Aunt!.Www@QuestionHome@Com