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My Little Secret

I have a little secret
hidden deep inside
i never speak of it
it makes me want to cry

i was just alittle girl
wanting to be your friend
instead i lived in fear
that it would never end

i waited everynight
for you to fall asleep
i'd lie there in silence
trying not to make a peep

years went by
and the pain went on
i never told anyone
pretended nothing was wrong

you never hit me
but you might as well
cause what you did to me
put me through hell

why did i let it go
on for so long
what did i do
that was so wrong

I know its not my fault
for what you did to me
our parents were
too blind to see

you raped me
almost everynight
for years and years
it was a constant fight

i wanted to tell
our mom and dad
but i was too afraid
that they would be mad

i knew they would be
mad at me and mad at you
thought to myself
theres nothing i can do

its over now
free from the pain
i know that i am
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
OMG!!!! thats beatifull wow wwowowoow u knoe i really like this poem but it gets me sad because exactly what ure poem says happened to me when i wus dating this guy who took advantage of me and almost forced me to have sex with him but i was able to move on from the memoryWww@QuestionHome@Com

How sad!.!.!.!.u r so talented I like all ur poems!. They r also understandable too unlike other poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

IT'S NOT A SECRET ANYMORE AND GLAD YOU FINALLY GOT IT OUT!.
HOW SADWww@QuestionHome@Com

Oh My God, that is sad!.
I was about to cry, oh god, that's a really good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com