okay so this is my poem, i had to write it for english!.!.!.
actually it was supposed to be song lyrics for english but i kinda didnt have a tune so it turned itself into a poem!.
constructive criticism!?
or destructive criticism, i dont really care!.
i just like it cause it feels true and i wanted to share it!.
Summer Bliss
The waves carried us back to
The place where i met you
As gentle as the wind that flew
Encapturing us in the rapturing blue!.
Time was always far away
Never imagining the day
'Goodbye' we'd have to say
And I'd pray,
Don't let me go
I know that you know
We spread ourselves beneath the palms
This summer is a ticking bomb!.
How long will this last!?
Can we forget the past!?
It all comes down to this
And here we lay in summer bliss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com