Other "haiku". What you think?

Question: Other "haiku"!. What you think!?

As a red leaf
On the naked branch -
Red kitten!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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It's ok!. Try to find other ideas though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A haiku has 17 syllables in the order of 5-7-5!. This has 12 syllables, 4-5-3!. I don't think that this is a very well thought out haiku!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i dont get it at all!. or what you are even trying to describe!.
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