Sorry I had one more in me...How is this for 1AM in the morning.?

Question: Sorry I had one more in me!.!.!.How is this for 1AM in the morning!.!?

"nectar"

Winters light
darkness spread,
don't let yourself be
tricked into silence,
by cold winds of disgrace!.

I gasp and
say nothing,
your divine
scarlet nectar,
I only need more!.
My bloodied lips
seek out your own!.
Morbid and lustful,
I fell on my sword!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

its almost 1am here ,we just had some one die here at workWww@QuestionHome@Com

you know im not the birightest onion in the patch but i odnt know what ur talking about but i do like it!. very descripive!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

ah yea nice!."Not" I definitely see and hear potential but I'd go back to the drawing board and work on it a little longerWww@QuestionHome@Com

first part doesn't connect with the last!.!.!.!.so am a bit lost!.!.!.!.
the last part is needing and wanting but the first part is what!?!?!?

no connection at all!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com