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Question: How much sun could a VampClan take!?
Sacrifice of Lanett

“Wait, Stop! I will go…
You do not have to shed their blood
If you wish to take my life
then take me and win HomeAbove”
Lanett shrieked before FirstStrike
All stood silent at ChildCry
her eyes RedBled to all the wrath
HelsingHunter dropped his gun
VampireWarlords scorched in SunBath
Stranger stepped up to her side
face FearStricken in heat
not willing that his charge should die
for her doom the girl would meet
Waiting on his soul command
The Clan stood round to see the end
“All of you, into the caves!”
The ClanKing said his men to defend

An accord to be made with this DamnedMan

How is the story going so far!? I hope it is making sense and is understood in its meaning… I can never tell so I would like to hear your thoughts…Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This does make sense and is, as usual, written with great giftedness!. I cannot tell what will happen next, so I am impatiently anticipating the next poem in the series!. This has been quite a wild and passionate course, this story, and it isn't letting up now!. I am enjoying it immensely!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I do really love your Vampire poems!. This one is, of course, excellent!. I think that only one second should burn them!.!.!. That is why they keep out completely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am in so much anticipation for the next chapter that I cannot even answer the question!.!.!. bring on more story!Www@QuestionHome@Com