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Question: Do you like my song/poem!? I call it "UGLY"!?
My hair is growing!. Growing all the time,
Just like my sorrow and these lies of mine,
It has been so long,
And I still think about where we went wrong!.

Here I am sitting lonely full of heart ache,
My feelings you did forsake,
Every puff of cigarette I take,
Is because of you!.

I am sick of all the mistakes u make,
I don't know how much more I can take,
This is a time of great confusion,
Now I see that your love was nothing but a cold illusion,

I break away from you every time,
I do not need you anymore,
I cannot feel you anymore,
Our memories are cold and ugly,
Just like you and me!.

By:
ANTI CHRIST

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It is very sad to have your heart broken
as a result of lies
and deceit
You want to be happy and to be able to trust
People who make mistakes do so for learning
but in your case it has caused you much grief
that will last you the rest of your life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

10 outa 10!.!.!.!.!.xWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's not bad i would give you a 10/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it a lot!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

ide give it a 8Www@QuestionHome@Com

it was good!! 10/10 for sure!Www@QuestionHome@Com