A poem for a monday. Do you like it.?

Question: A poem for a monday!. Do you like it!.!?

"frozen"

I lost a golden hair,
carried by the wind!.
Caught inside my heart,
released by unseen hands!.
This unrequited sign,
unknown to my embrace!.
A pusling tightened throat,
squeezed hard around my soul!.
Uttering my name,
the pleasure and the pain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I know a lot of people who aren't as concerned about rhythm; you alternated between 5, 6, and 7 syllables per line!. It flows nicely, but if you were looking for that kind of comment, there you have it!.

I really, really liked it, just like the rest of your poetry!. ;) If you don't mind telling, how old are you!? I'd like to be as awesome at writing as you!.!.!.keep doing it, plz! <3Www@QuestionHome@Com

I know where Shela O is coming from!.Thanks for the beautiful poem! Edit!. I love it!. This AM again, I read it over and over!. It continues to be a very deep, touching love poem!. Someone or something that has, at sometime, touched your life!. The title is ideal, expressing moments frozen in time or your mind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thats better than what I had
I had:
Roses are red
violets are blue
Angels in heaven
Know I love you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry, But I didn't understand a bit of it!. But keep writing none the less!. Ignore me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that was deep and beautiful!.!.!. a+++++++!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was deep!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

really good, but the title doesnt fit!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

i love it and thanks for brightening up my mondayWww@QuestionHome@Com