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I wrote this poem and i need a next line!.
mabye if you could fix it up a little to!. but i just need something to go with the last line!. ((rhyming please))
There is something about you,
that keeps drawing me back,
i cant describe it, theres not enough facts!.
They say love makes you blind, i never beieved it until you came into my eyes!.
By the sight of your picture you brighten my future,
to the point where im no longer in a confusion!.
Your one of those people who i look forward to talking with!.
but whenever we're done
i replay the conversation not leaving out a bit!.
your name pops up in my head all the time,
mabye someone is trying to tell me something,
something that i will soon be able to find!.
and now to the conclusion of all these feelings for you,
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
There is something about you,
that keeps drawing me back,
i cant describe it, theres not enough facts!.
They say love makes you blind, i never beieved it until you came into my eyes!.
By the sight of your picture you brighten my future,
to the point where im no longer in a confusion!.
Your one of those people who i look forward to talking with!.
but whenever we're done
i replay the conversation not leaving out a bit!.
your name pops up in my head all the time,
mabye someone is trying to tell me something,
something that i will soon be able to find!.
and now to the conclusion of all these feelings for you,
--> you fill my heart with love that will forever stay true!.
orr!.!.
you light up my life more and more
you fill my heart with love that forever soars
hope this helps!
i love the poem, it's beautiful & touching!.
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i have not figured it out yet, but hopefully will soon
hope i helped
mariahWww@QuestionHome@Com
HELLO
I LIKE YOUR POEM BUT THIS IS WHAT ME AND MY DAUGHTER HAVE COME UP WITH!.
There is something about you,
that keeps drawing me back!.
I can't describe it, theres not enough facts!.
They say love makes you blind!.
I never believed it until you came into my eyes!.
By the sight of your picture,
you brighten my future
to the point where there is no confusion!.
You're one of those people who I look
forward to talking with
but whenever we're done ,
I replay the conversation not leaving out a bit!.
Your name pops up in my head all the time!.
Maybe someone is trying to tell me something,
something that I will soon beable to find!.
Now the conclusion of all these feelings for you,
the memory of of your face and the feelings I have for you will stay not only in my heart but in my mind!.
I HOPE THIS HELPS YOU OUT!. YOU ARE VERY TALENTED!.
GOOD LUCK
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