Wanna tell me what you think of my poem?

Question: Wanna tell me what you think of my poem!?

Idk what to name this!.!.!.:

I love you so deeply,
I love you so much,
I love the sound of your voice,
And the way that we touch,

I love your nice smile,
And the kind, thoughtful way,
You bring all the joy,
To my life everyday,

I love you today,
As I have from the start,
And I'll love you forever,
With all of my heart!.

~Brit Parlin~ April 27, 2008Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I love this poem!.!.especially the rhyming scheme!. Great job!.!.keep up your writing and I'll keep reading! =DWww@QuestionHome@Com

Okay, I'm going to be completely honest with you and say that if you're not a beginning poet, then you have a lot of work to do!. To me the poem sounded very common, and lacked the essentials of poetry!.
A few tips:
1!. Stay away from lines cliche!. Ex: "with all of my heart"
2!. Add tons of Imagery!. Ex: "I love you so deeply" = "My love is a bottomless well"
3!. Try not to use common repitition!. Ex: "I love you", "I love you", "I love you"Www@QuestionHome@Com

it makes my stomach flutter! the only thing is!.!.!.!. if people dont read it in that romantic way and are just reading it to read!.!.!.!. or if u dont say it int hat romantic way then i kind of gets cheesy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Anyone would feel lucky to get a poem like this given to them, very nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like your poem!.!.!.keep practicingWww@QuestionHome@Com

umm maybe "i love u"Www@QuestionHome@Com