A poem for you to browse? Will you also critique?

Question: A poem for you to browse!? Will you also critique!?

I heard the wind's voice sing
To the leaves!.
Causing the branches to sway in delight!.
I think I just saw a tree blush!.

Until!.!.

I witnessed a bee
Flirting openly with a flower,
In a field of dreams!.
The flower stood serenely
When the bee asked for a dance!.
Have I just witnessed love blooming!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Well, kinda hard to critique something that doesn't need any!. Very nice pen!. Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Semper my friend,

As always, you have touched my heart with the talent that God has given to you!.

Since I don't have the gift with words that you have, I will stumble along as best I can to critique!.

Your words take my heart on a flight of fancy to such a place of serenity that I am enraptured by the wind and the bee coaxing and titilating love to come out and play!.

It reminds me a lot of the Song of Solomon in its gentle manner!.

Great job! Please don't ever give up writing poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is quite lovely and perfect just the way you wrote it!. I was enchanted from the very first wonderful line and the rest is just as charming!. I simply love this poem!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

beautiful in its simplicity!. Like a poem of prose versèd!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No EWD here! Beautiful imagery sung in perfect melody!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have no critique for this beautiful poem! Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

THIS IS AWESOME OMG!. Damn i wish i could write like you lol good job!.!. Maybe you could post some more I really enjoyed reading this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is well done and I am not a big flower type of guy! lol Great images!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

no- critique today!.!.just love like a bee flirting with a flowerWww@QuestionHome@Com

As usual, much is said in few words, and it loses no poetic quality!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very nice indeed!Www@QuestionHome@Com

NICE !.!.!.really niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

Blushing trees!.!.!.!.dancing bees!.!.!.
This is perfect! I love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is very new!.!.!.not bad for an old fart!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com