New poem. please comment?

Question: New poem!. please comment!?

The Earth

the earth trembles
and i fall through
truth burns me
like the fire to come

never turning back
can't say i didn't look
try to stay strong
but i crumble

i don't know my destiny
but i know what i must do
i've got to hold my own
i've got to push throughWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You're a really good poet! I love how it's deep without being cheesy like so many are!. That's hard to do! Keep it up! i love it <33Www@QuestionHome@Com

The poem-by Quackomojando

Your poem is so bad
You should be sad!.
The more that i read
The longer i plead
that you be beheaded
and in hell you be embedded!.

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