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Question: I wrote this, Do you like!?
So hear I am once again thinking of you with this feeling burning in my heart, this feeling burning in my soul, in my every single bit of life I call an existence/

Burning a brand deep, but not into my skin but into our skin/

This love is bigger then this world and stronger than we are willing to admit

So hear I am once again with this love burning in my heart/ alone again but alone is a place I can handle if I am alone with you/

Time is endless as is this love, this feeling, this craving, this bit of life I call existence/

I call this endless love……you, and never will I be burning or living endlessly with you in my heart, my life, my forever

Forever I endlessly love youWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Paul, The words are beautiful, now find someone to put music to it and sing it and I believe it could be a hit!. It has a message and so many songs today do not say anything!.

I bet you could fill many spaces on Yahoo or Youtube with wonderful words!. My partner of 12 yrs!. passed 1-27-2007 and he was only (45); When I began reading this I felt He had you put this on Yahoo (KNOWING WE ARE FANS) so he could give me a message from Other Side!. I thankyou from my heart for
sharing these beautiful words!.Peace!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!. It's very deep and beautiful :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

i think it was amazing that is one of the best poem that i've seen so farWww@QuestionHome@Com

i dont like !.!.!.
i love ;)
good job, it's touchingWww@QuestionHome@Com

it did'nt ryme!.!.!.!.!.!.!.but it was sweet!.!.!.!.!.!.if u gave that to a girl!.!.!.!.!.!.boy would she be happy=)Www@QuestionHome@Com