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Question: Is this a good poem dedicated to Gideon!?
My Muse
By Elaine P
My Muse and I
had an argument
over what is
and what is not
poetry!.
She made me
feel so angry
I told her to
take a long
hike!.
My Muse said
“I’m going over
to Gideon’s
and maybe I’ll never
return!.”
That’s okay
I’m still
mad
at
her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
My muse and I
sat and watched Elaine's
storm off
in a temper!.
I turned to mine
and smiled!.
At least,
I said,
we know
where we go
when we're angry!.
"Damn straight,"
she replied!.
"I'm going
to see
Elaine!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is great Elaine!. It is very funny!. I love that you are still mad at her!. Maybe when you forgive her, she'll return!. She's obviously been a bad girl!. Meanwhile, Gideon profits!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I really like it a lot!.Another great poem !. Gideon will really love it!.,!.,!.,Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like your poem!. I can feel it!.
Elaine, is there any chance that my muse is there with yours!?
Mine just left!.!.!.didn't leave a single consonant or vowel!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is sooooo Elaine!.
Beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Another fabulous write Elaine!. Your pen inspires and churns the soul!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
So the party's at Gideon's!?
Let me pack a lunch and I'm on my way!
I like the poem a lot!Www@QuestionHome@Com
That`s a very cool poem Elaine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
There's more here than meets the eye!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well said!. The free style suits you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com