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Question: Did your poem get sick after riding the Scrambler!?
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The Carnival Ride
by TD Euwiate
Auntie laughs at the ticket window!.
She mumbles a little…
“Illusions cost $5,
Deceptions are free!.”
The lemonade vendor has a long line
because Auntie says citron flavor
is easy to imitate!.
I want to ride the one that goes
all the way upside down!. Auntie’s flask
freshens he lemonade; now she will ride
with me on that one!.
Auntie looks a little green…
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
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Auntie Mame! Go head on!.!.!.ooopppsssss, uh, not 'head on' headache thing!.!.!.!.
Have15 nips for me!.!.!.then pass me the flask, full!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I get sick at anything and would never go on anything like that!. For the moment, I am just concentrating on this line, "Deceptions are free"!. Looking at the skyline is the only way not to get sick!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
If memory serves I'm playing Auntie and when my flask is freshened I'd like to go sit over there and listen to the oldies band!.!.!.I don't like to go upside down no more!.
*Now go look at my picture, please!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Top marks sonny boy!.
Yer getting a "Star" for the best title ever!.!.!.!
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Where are all the "thumbs down" coming from!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
The Scrambler didn't do it, but the dreaded Tilt-O-Whirl got my lunch and breakfast!. Maybe it's not hungry now, I ain't!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Gimme some of that lemonade!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You won't get me on that ride, but I'll have some of that lemonade !Www@QuestionHome@Com
Have you been nipping!? freshens he lemonade!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
i want to ride with ya too :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Citron what a wonderful taste!.!.!.more like sick on the zipper though!.!.!.I hated that ride!.Www@QuestionHome@Com