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Question: Is this poem good, is this clear or darkly!?
Is this poem good, is this clear or darkly!? Please look at my other poems too!.
This is called: Sheep Skinned Victom

Cry,
At gun point who’s the bully!?

Crybaby,
Let the pulley change thought of direction

Cry,
Shoot and hoot that we made you do this

Cry
Why bother, I am the victim now

Chiao,
Take a Bow

Sonora Dumb, Don’t forget your own life, Rife

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That's really dark!.!. but I like it! [looks around] Maybe I'm crazy too!Www@QuestionHome@Com