I am a begginner, How is it?

Question: I am a begginner, How is it!?

How is this, it is my 4th poem, please answear my other poems!.
This is called Peril Problem Dead loss

How could this pretense take you!?
You think of the past last!.
Is the jury mast working!?

How could you not sense this!?
Deliberate defense is yours
Did you not think!?This ship will sink!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Very good for a beginner
and your 4th poem too
I am sensing a bit of justice in here
because of the deliberating and jury

I also sense deception because of the
question how could you not sense this
also Did you not think!?
A life may be a stake because this ship will sink!.Www@QuestionHome@Com