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Question: Should the mansion series come to an end!?
My Mansion

This ancient house has stood the test,
Time it's worst enemy!.
It started many years ago,
In eighteen fourty three!.

You enter through the oaken doors,
Into a lavish place!.
The mirrors on the high built walls,
Adorned with golden lace!.

The ceiling is three stories high,
A truly awesome thing!.
The walls are hung with tapestries,
Hung by a golden ring!.

Out in the back is nine more rooms,
For those who serve us here!.
The kitchen is a room alone,
It gives the cook much cheer!.

Upstairs upon the second floor,
Spaced out in circled wall!.
You'll find the bedrooms are up there,
There are fourteen in all!.

One for the master and his wife,
One for each child, all ten!.
The rest for guests who come to call,
They drop by now and then!.

I now reside within this house,
A mansion some will say!.
My family built this lovely home,
And we're still here today!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Mansions like these live on in words!.!.!.stop the series and 'something' vanishes about this beauty!.
So, write, and write!.!.!.put the poetry and prose in a journal, with pictures!.!.!.!.but, write on indeed!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very well done sir!. I had the privilege of living four years on the grounds of "Loretta" ca1776, home of Mr!. and Mrs!. Wm!. Wilbur!.I stayed in their guest house, originally the slave masters quarters!. The house is well documented in Virginia history and purportedly haunted!. Nicely built and worded!. RScottWww@QuestionHome@Com

I believe there are many more rooms to be described in this mansion!. The series must continue!. (A couple of typos: S 1 change "it's to "its" and "fourty" to forty!.")!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

If you have more in you, never stop! Besides, I'm enjoying the series and look forward to learning more about the war, the people, and the mansion!. Keep going Dondi!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Never, never, never--It's like a book you have just got into, can't put it down, want to know more!.It's right on Dondi,write on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No - please do not discontinue this series!. I am simply attuned to that house - just the description of it - is pleasing!. Maybe an old Southern soul coming out in me!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

And what do you plan!? Hopefully you muse will direct you onward!. Well penned!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow i just love these mansion poem you right as they really make me see it all in my head' and i loved this time of the world when they had plantations and wehen love was love' and it was such a romantic time it seems!.Please do not stop writing these or these types of poems as we all of us your fans love them so!.If you were in the story you would be like Rhett butler' so handsome' so sexy' and so smooth to the ladies lol!. Edit When voting comes i will vote you for king on my ballet too' as your much better than all of the choices and that's no lol this is true as Dondi you are 100 percent gentleman with a heart of Gold!.!.!.!.!.Cami!.Www@QuestionHome@Com