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Question: In the spirit of "writer's block" is this OK!?
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Peace is not far,
It's there, on the horizon,
relax and enjoy it
a while!.!.!.
Blazing orange ball,
ribbons of color
from yellow to magenta
huge puffs of white
drifting away,melting
Dusk falls here
Dawn breaks elsewhere,
there is peace
It can be world wide,
Put down your gun,
put your heart on your sleeve,
Get down on your knees and PRAY,
For Peace!.!.!.
FINALLY!.

There is more to this!.!.!.I just want a preview!.!.!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
As you know, you have my prayers for peace!. On the day my brother was to be shipped out for Kuwait, he had a freak case of appendicitis!. I don't know what this forebodes, but I can only pray that it is God's hand keeping him from danger!. I will join you in putting my heart on my sleeve, and I am on my knees daily!. Thank you, Reenie!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

What writer's block! Yes, peace for those that are in action
zones, no matter who they are, but that seems an impossibility, we are gratiful for peace within, when we allow that to be!. yes we pray for peace, but are we hopeful it will be!.
So many now wounded, body, mind, soul!. It is very tragic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

There is no writers block in this poem, i find it extremely powerful, and in essence what it says to me is :- Look at what is real, take a moment to think, if you made prayer your priority, there would be no need for war!.
To which i can only reply, Amen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I heard an old soldier's saying: "God helps them that helps themselves!." Peace isn't going to descend on the world like manna in the desert!. We have the free will to determine if we're going to destroy the planet or make peace!. I'm not very optimistic!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful Reenie - very heartfelt!. If only it could be that simple!. What a wonderful way to enlighten everyone - too bad - that "everyone" seems to need enlightenment!. Let's keep praying!. Title: Pease Enlightenment !? ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful, something we all wish for and pray daily for, peace on this earth!.I want a better world for my grandchildren!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is beautiful!.!.!.we all need to pray for peaceWww@QuestionHome@Com

that's really good i really like itWww@QuestionHome@Com