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Question: I wrote this poem when I was 13!. Read and comment please!?
"Cut"
A raw, rusty taste,
Lingering in the mind,
To slice and craft an artwork,
So beautiful,
So harsh and abusive,
Of love, of obssession,
To tear apart
Peice by piece,
Part by part,
Limb by limb,
With no regret, no guilt!.
To hear the screams,
Of terror,
Of submission,
Of inferiority!.
And finally,
To watch her weaken,
And plead,
And die!.
Yes, I used to cut, but I stopped a long time ago!. This was when I was young and foolish and trying to experiment with a lot of different things!. What do you guys think!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it is disturbing to know at age 13 you experienced such painWww@QuestionHome@Com
teen years are SO HARD, and dealt with SO differently by each individual!. So much is involved!. I Know what the feelings are like!. I have one similar about the pain and aloneness of teen years,its in this poetry sight under Has anyone felt this way,let me know what you think of that one,written back in1972!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
its a good poem its just that i dont like what its about!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
its goodWww@QuestionHome@Com
SO BU-T-FUL!!!!!!
LOVE IT SO MUCH
U GET A STAR!!! ^^Www@QuestionHome@Com