or compliment my poem?

Question: Critisize and/or compliment my poem!?

this is my poem its a limerick so itll be fast

there once was a boy who was lazy
then a girl gave him a daisy
he blushed on sight
and had a big fright
when he learned the girl was crazy!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Nice one you wrote there

Weather:
The sky is clear
and yet the clouds are near
pitter patter was the rain
I exclaimed oh no not again!.
In the summer this too will be hereWww@QuestionHome@Com

Well, I liked it! It gave me images like the cartoons in my head (like Goofy or Mickey Mouse or any cartoon character!.!.!.you know, when they run away in terror over the hill and into the sunset!?)!.

P!.S!. I looooooooooove limericks :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

cute dittyWww@QuestionHome@Com

lol its funnyWww@QuestionHome@Com

i love itWww@QuestionHome@Com