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Position:Home>Poetry> Metaphor poem?Question: Metaphor poem!? ok i need a poem like this, its about a watermelon!. it can be about anything but not include the object in it!.
The green buddha sits on the fruit stand we eat the face but spit out the smile!. can u make it 4 lines but a little more detailed!. by the way this isnt for school!. im making a poetry book and seeing what i can get in it!. thanks!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I'm fine with not receiving credit for my work!. It's not really that important to have a name next to a poem, but more important to have a poem that is readable, enjoyable, and thought provoking!. This is a tough subject to write a poem about, or even a metaphor, or simile about, but I thought, what the science, I'd give it a try!. A green sphere of earth's production!. A pink inside, to devour by bite or suction!. Slices, dices, make a tasty appetizer!. Separate world of shapes all green and pink, A sphere of another one wiser I think!. 5-lines!?!!!!? Cheesy, and not award winning, but at least I tried!. also, I think it's kind of tasty!. Thanks for the creative motivation to write on a subject I've never even read about before!.Www@QuestionHome@Com If you're writing a poetry book, it needs to be your own work!. I'd love to help you with this, but then you would have to acknowledge whoever wrote in your book!. In response to the question you left for my last post!.!.!.I concentrate on sad things because there isn't much happiness in my life right now!. I'm thinking about trying a happyish poem tonight, so I guess I'll see how that turns out!.Www@QuestionHome@Com yeh if your doing a poetry book it should be your stuff so work on that instead of giving my poem kinda unconstructive criticism coz i write my own poems unlike youWww@QuestionHome@Com good i love itWww@QuestionHome@Com |