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Question: Help with ode poem- Ode to Jewellery!?
Caressing the precious pearls upon her neckline
Its luxury and lust lingers in minds
The greed and want overwhelms some
As others are drowning in the mystical magic’s that comes of it!.

Twinkling, Twilight trails the midst of her naked wrist!.
Her alluring heirloom remains in her past desires!.
Eyes shining like golden sapphires!.
The gloss glistens with reflective light at ones exotic visage

A petite pin seared an opening within her flesh,
What Remains, a crater for sterling to rest!.
Her locks curtain the stunning show, though once tucked back,
A tiny shimmer is revealed across the floor!.

A decision has arrived that must be made
One should think of eternity of desire
One that will bond her one that will sell her
Adoring affection released with an emblem of position

I need help writing the rest i jsut can't seem to think of anything!. any help would be nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
But trapped like an image adorned with pain
The love of jewels is a love of the vain
the stars sparkle brighter than the ones on her hand,
the ones she sold her soul for in this world of man
So she watches it glitter as her gaze slowly fades
and realizes slowly the error of her ways
Her life had no passion, her lover was cold
True love is endless and is not bought and sold
true love is not diamonds rubies or gold
but a feeling that quenches your heart, mind and soul
Her diamonds do not warm her as she takes her last breath
she never knew love and now she wears death!.Www@QuestionHome@Com