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Question: Couldnt sleep until i wrote down how i felt in this poem!?
What do you do when you are lost
lost between truth and lies
how can someone be so vindictive
why cant you just understand me
i dont want to believe you
i want to believe you dont want me to
we've tried to understand, solve to puzzle
but the peices dont seem to fit
who can you love when all love has died
buried with faith and trust
how do you know when love is real
that it even existed to begin with
is love worth it all, the pain
if love can die, is it possible to kill it!?
when does love begin
does it start with a feeling, emotion, a sense of wellbeing
can a single kiss bring life to love
why is love so simple to be cultivated
yet so diffifcult to be liberated
!.!.!.at some point be true to yourself, look at it and ask
are you worth my love!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
poem is a vent to all your thoughts
the paper is your friend who listens without whining
after writing the paper becomes precious
a memory we love to remember!.
and this is a gr8 poem treasure it
and continue to write
so that we too can enjoy reading such a beautiful writing
keep up the good workWww@QuestionHome@Com
He walks around carrying her in His arms
trying to find arms gentle enough that
He can place her there
He cries the tears of despair
no arms to shelter His love
not even yours
how mistaken
they both were
thinking that you are so
simple in all your genius
so kind
so merciful
He will take her home
somehow
some day
and we leave you
go round and round in circles
asking asking and asking
thinking thinking and thinking
your home shows who you really are
yet
they both wanted to believe
you are not your home
you are so much more
than your theories
and your questions
and your strategies
and your egoism
Good luck
He is merciful
He will forgive
just leave Him decide
what to do NOW
with His child
stop playing Him
stop teaching Him
what is best for herWww@QuestionHome@Com
im glad to hear you were able to find rest after you put this down on paper!.
i guess releasing these thoughts and emotions out eased your mind somehow!.
i like your poem by the way, and it sounds like you have much going on inside!.
keep writing; you sound very talented!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is really awesome and great' and i enjoyed it so much,Your great with your writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
thats realy good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I wish I could write half as good as that!.!.!.i love it!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
deep!. you got talentWww@QuestionHome@Com