Comment on "There May Be", a poem I'm working on?

Question: Comment on "There May Be", a poem I'm working on!?

In sadness,
There may be tears,
But they shall moisten my eyes!.

In failure,
There may be dashed hopes,
But not everyone wins the prize!.

In pain,
There may be horror,
But above there are still blue skies!.

In death,
There may be sorrow,
But eventually everything dies!.

But in abandonment
And twisted lies,
There's nothing but sad goodbyes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Wow, this is an awesome poem
Everything you said so far is
the truth!.

In Sadness
There would also be depression
and hopelessness!.

Failure:
You did the best you can
but still didn't perfect things
but then no one is perfect
Just do the best you can

In Pain
There are different kinds
as one will find
besides physical

In death
The person is gone
they will be remembered from
the heart

In abandonment
Comes deception
not a nice reception
Sad goodbyes and tears
from someone the other person thought they trusted!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice, shows a very acute awareness of life and feelings!. An emotional piece!. Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Quite true and well stated!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is great!.!.!.you speak the truthWww@QuestionHome@Com

its okay!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!. amazing!. thing for writing!?Www@QuestionHome@Com