Mostly I just want a little con-crit on a poem I wrote not so long ago!.
Poetry is perhaps my weakest area in Literacy, so please do not be too harsh!. I'm only 16 and don't write much poetry at all!.
Long replies are LOVED, but a fleeting comment is just as nice!.
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Thanks!.
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