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Question: A poem i kinda rewrote!?
not really but i did change some things a little bit

There has been something
On my mind all year
And at this moment
I honestly fear

This bothersome thing
Has gotten the best of me
But you were always there
If you would only let me

Tell you what’s really
Been on my mind
It’s a little bit silly
But when I see you I find

That no matter what happens
You lighten my mood
And no matter what you go through
I’ll be there for you

I know I just sound shy
And it’s really weird
But please let me finish
Because to me its clear

This sounded right in my head
But when it all down
Every word you said
Spoke to me very loudWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its good

i like it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it better when you dont try to rhyme

and please rate my poem its down the page :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow ur goooood!!
that was deep!.Www@QuestionHome@Com