Any poets here aged 15 or more want a free style poetry match? (ps im 15 and i c

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Question:

ok i made this up earlier

I was once lonely!. A life hater never rose to my full potential!. Everything I touched turned to hatred or jealousy!. I could never understand why!?
I met a lot of people, different in all ways black, white, Asian, but never met anyone special like you!.
Everything I judged was with my pessimist views with you the views died you turned me from pessimistic to optimistic, treating everything around me with a life!. Chucking rubbish in the bin not the floor!. Calmly shutting the door closing everything behind me!. Opening the gates and slamming the fearful life which I once loved!. A life of pure hate!. Revulsion, enmity!. Frustration!.
Until the red wave saw light and suddenly turned blue, the closed path around me!. Dead end!. Opened with thousands of routes!. Each with one reach, one entrance!. The route to you!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's not really free style but I'm 15, and just made up this poem but it's not the best, and i just felt like post it, so here:

I am your silence
in the noisy street
I am your words unspoken
in a tensioned room
I am your color
in a black and white picture
I am your peace
in war
I am your drought
in the rain forest
I am your world
in need
I am your clouds
in a sunny day
I am your stillness
in a dance
I am your doctor
in health
I am your mercy
in unknown cruelty
I am your wealth
in gold
I am your isolation
in the crowd

I am your imagination
in the mind!.

I like the second one, that one is nice, a lot of emotion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm 16 and don't expect me to be much more intellectual than you just because I'm older!.

how can a teapot be the same as a dinner plate!.!?
If you live in this world, this question pops up in everyone's head!.

there, three lines, don't over analyse it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am 15 and I was going to post one I made but yours would put mine to shame, bravo!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

well im 14, hope u dont mind underage contestants!.

If walls could speak
they'd say hello
they saw me not breathing
and my life begin to close!.

If walls could speak
they'd say i wasn't alone
that there are others out there
who will actually care

If I could speak
I'd tell them to shut up
I have cried so many tears
I dont wanna be here

See the problem is
People dont care
they walk on by
as if I'm not there!.

So I might as well
not be so in need
because people will just look at me
and watch me bleed!.

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I tried! Not that good thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com

I just made this up and It's not as long and elaborate and beautiful as your but hey I tried!.!.!.

I can't wait to pack my things
discover what life has for me
everyday a new mystery
the sun will be out to guide me

And I won't miss it here at all
This place will fade away in time
And I don't need you or anyone else
I'm gonna be alright

So please don't try to follow me
Cause I won't be waiting for you like you expect me to
You wanna drag me down like you always do
I'll never be your fool

So watch me as I fly away
Goodbye, Farewell, So long
You thought I would stay here forever
But I'm gone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com