Does this sound okay for a school couplet...Sometimes when I look at the sky, Al

Question: Does this sound okay for a school couplet!.!.!.Sometimes when I look at the sky, All that I see are your eyes!?

it's for my english final and I have to create 8 poems and this is the one that I came up with for my couplet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Yeah, the poem better be good though!.!.!.lol!. I guess the best ones are with personal experience!. When we look into the sky, what can we see but all the eyes twinkling on our predicaments and lives!? Promising wisdom and understanding with a silent brightness to our dark nights to those who look to them seeking the eyes of those they love!.
Whoops!.!.!.got off on a tanget!.!.!.that's your proof!.!.!.it's very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah, it's okay!. Anyone who's been in love will know the feeling!. You see her everywhere!.Www@QuestionHome@Com