A rewrite poem?

Question: A rewrite poem!?

its a rewrite of one of my older poems!.!.!.!. i think its better

Some days it rains
Others it pours
Some days the pain
Closes all doors

One day without you
Just goes to waste
No memory of you
Can ever be replaced

My dreams are of days
When we were together
I can't stop and gaze
Without rain in the weather

I wish you could see
In a never ending maze
If we only could be
We'd have sunshiny daysWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

awww i loved it i think it takes a lot of guts to pots yours like this i mean i did it all the time w/ mine and the responses were always good and i loved knowing what people thought of them it meant a lot to me to know they liked them now you should keep writing they will only get better i tell myself that every time i write a new one and ima sure it will work for youWww@QuestionHome@Com

AWESOME AS GOOD AS THE FIRST 10+Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was quite lovelyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Love It!Www@QuestionHome@Com