A poem i just wrote down?

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Question:

There has been something
On my mind this year
And at this moment
I honestly fear

This annoying thing
Has got the best of me
But you were always there
If you would turn and see

And let me tell you whats really
Been on my mind
It’s a little bit silly
But when I see you I find

That no matter what happens
You lighten my mood
And no matter what you go through
I’ll be there for you

I know I just sound shy
And it’s a bit weird
But please let me finish
Because to me its clear

This sounded right in my head
But when it all down
Every word you said
Spoke to me very loud

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

first of al, that was beautiful!.

and a very good talent to have!. writing like that!? is powerful, u may not think its that great but it speaks to some !.

rating!? one to ten!? 10- and beyond!.

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Well if I was the person to whom you're referring, it would probably make me fall for you!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think your poem is wonderful! If we are trueful with ourselves, at one point in our lives, we feel like this!. Great work, keep writing! :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like it, its sweet :)
but i also would like it even more if you didn't rhyme

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wow that was amazing i absolutely loved it!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

ya it is great & very beautiful i give it a 10Www@QuestionHome@Com

first of all u are a very talented poet second it was amazingly beautiful third there is no number that exsists for me to tell u how good it is but here 10+
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