what do you think of my poem!? constructive criticism plz im only 14
You add more black to this white
The darkness overpowering the light
I watch my surroundings turn from white to gray
Its starting to become a sad cliche
Then the title of gray is rejected
For no trace of white can be detected
But here in darkness i am content
Beacuse unnoticibly time is spent
So here in darkness i lye
Waiting for my heart to die
I'm blind from reality and pain
As long as this numbness i obtain
But I know that the next time i see you tears will flow with ease
And painful flashbacks will come as they please
'Cause the truth unspoken, is that my heart is broken
And the darkness soon you will fight, holding the blade of lightWww@QuestionHome@Com