My first attempt on a different kind of poetry..PLEASE comment?

Question: My first attempt on a different kind of poetry!.!.PLEASE comment!?

You are the cloud
Your many forms speak to mee
against the blue,words
of love letters

Wet raindrops,your fingers
run down my temples
and I, a green leaf
of white water Lillies
sway!.!.!.
with the flow of your pitter patters
rocking me softly

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I love this!. There are, however, a couple of things that if you changed around, i think would improve it!. I see it like this:-

You are the clouds
Forms that speak to me
against the blue sky’s
of love letters

fingers of raindrops
run down my temples
as I, your water Lillie
sway!.!.!.
The rhythm of your pitter patter
rocking me softly

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! It was very pretty, and I also thought of how if you changed some of it around it could be even prettier, But yes liked it and you really have a talent here, just needs to be polished some and that is a complement !Www@QuestionHome@Com