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Question: Revision of previous post- whatayathink!?
Writer’s Block
He pokes at the keyboard and sighs;
the cursor blips like radar
tracking dead air!.
words appear only to disappear-
one letter at a time
or in coal-black chunks!.
The beginning is always beginning
and the end is too possible to contemplate!.
He’s stuck in the middle, mired
in the quicksand that is lifeWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
How come you rented a place on Writer's Block!? You would be better off living on the corner of Throw Caution to the Wind Avenue and Pepto-Bismol Boulevard!. It is right next to the Stream of Consciousness!. Your writing (and a lot more) should flow better there!. You can get there on the Train of Thought, it's an Express (of course)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very good, but I'm not crazy about the part starting with "and the end is too !.!.!.!. - through the end of the poem!.
Cheers,Www@QuestionHome@Com
Me likie! It seems the better poetry's always posted at night!. ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com