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Question: A little something to release the pain!.!.!.!?
did u know that i still love u!?
that i cant sleep @ night cuz ur not there
did u know i dream of u, but when i wake i cry!?
my heart aches & i swear it'z broken
did u know that ur picture hangs on my wall!?
the 1 of the family u threw away
did u know i spends my dayz in pain!?
my nightz in tearz
did u know when u said 4ever, i believed!?
i never doubted u
did u know u were part of the happiness in my life!?
now u r my pain
did u know i am empty!?
heartbroken empty soul
did u know i think of u & wish 4 death!?
to end this misery
did u know i wish i could 4get u!?
erase all the promises
did u know i lived 4 u!?
i wanted you to be proud of me
did u know i never told!?
all the blows , i absorbed
did u know they lay deeper!?
the bruises reside on my heart
did u know i can breath!?
i cant find my way out of the dark
did u know i cant fly!?
but i want to leap
did u know anything!?
or do u ever care!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like it!. Your these are true feelings!. I respect anyone thats real??Heres a dedication From one heart broken girl to another xoxo just know when your crying most likely Iam too!.Your not alone Chola??
http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=jwZy3jQlJ!.!.!.
I know
(Are you ok!?)
How it feels
(I want you to know that you can talk to me about anything)
You’ve been hurt so bad
(Anytime)
I know
(I couldn’t help but notice that somethin’ was wrong)
How it feels
(By the look in your eyes)
You’ve been hurt so bad
(It’s no surprise)
Don’t think I know!? Well I do, been hurt before just like you
Even the best get depressed, the loneliest loneliness
Got so much on my chest that I can’t rest and I’m sleepless
And I keep this a secret, say you’ll keep it
The guy I want to be with doesn’t see it, can’t believe it
Doesn’t need this so he’s leavin’, I’m the reason
I still love him for all seasons, I’m in pieces
Turn my frown upside down so no one sees it
I mean this
I know
(I know how it feels)
How it feels
You’ve been hurt so bad
(But there’s really nothin’ you can do)
I know, how it feels
(There’s someone for everyone)
You’ve been hurt so bad
(And maybe it’s just not the one for you)
Beware of the danger at the fork in love’s road
Sit in bed, feelin’ cold and alone, please come back home
Sometimes I feel I should just let him go
If he comes back to me he’s meant for me
But he loves someone instead of me
The intensity is killin’ me, you don’t want this misery
How will it be!? Is this the way it feels to be destroyed!?
That’s what I did to him, that’s what he did to me
I’m thinkin’ of him and I’m hopin’ that he’s missin’ me
You feelin’ me!?
I know
(I know)
How it feels
(I know)
You’ve been hurt so bad
(Every smilin’ face ain’t a happy one)
I know
(And everybody’s somebody’s fool)
How it feels
You’ve been hurt so bad
(Ain’t no exception to the rule)
(I know)
That this is real
(Stayin’ up late at night)
give me a hand
(Play my records till I just don’t want to hear them anymore)
And I’m here to stand
(Reminiscin’ on all the times we had)
And baby this is so real
Memories of long ago, love letters let him know
Words of love so meaningful
I just can’t see him go it’s gonna take a miracle
Torture and sadness appear when I’m lonely
It drives me insane how it’s never the same
he doesn’t know how bad it kills me inside
How the tears behind my eyes won’t show through my pride
But the touch that warms me through and through
I know how it feels, I know what you’re goin’ through
There’s nothin’ you can do, I feel for you
I truly do (I truly do)
I know
(‘Cause I know)
How it feels
(I know)
You’ve been hurt so bad
I know how it feels, you’ve been hurt so bad
I know
(I know)
How it feels
You’ve been hurt so bad
(Can’t sleep at night)
I know
(Got no appetite)
How it feels
(But everything’s gonna be alright)
You’ve been hurt so bad
(I know, I know)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Way to wordy and way too many misspellings and intentional misspellings!. Poetry, while you can do alot of things with, Using the letter "u" for you is unacceptable!. You need to pare alot of words from this!. For example, 3rd line: Did you know I dream of you, but when I wake I cry!. Just shorten it to "Did you know I dream of you!?" See it is much easier to read, it flows better!. Just my opinion!. The idea you are presenting is fine, it just is not executed properlyWww@QuestionHome@Com
Cry aaaah the is so sad *hug u*
love sometime is pain but is good to
love and like there not the same
yes ask did u really love him/her
did u, if u did yes don't cry someone love u you yes don't know it look for the sameone and don't cry for the someone yes be strong there someone all u yes gat to open your eyes to see him/her
love=^-^=cookie28Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow, that is really deep girl!. I am glad that you are writing your pain out and I am very sorry for your loss and I am hoping that the other guy is as well, he doesn't know what he is missing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
ask a friend or a neighbor they can help youWww@QuestionHome@Com