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Position:Home>Poetry> Walk in the garden; Care to comment?Question: Walk in the garden; Care to comment!? As I walk through my garden
I see the tallest tree Straight, mighty and magnificent It is the height of my dreams I bend down to smell the flowers Their fragrance is so sweet So many different colours That they draw me unto peace The grass under my feet Gives me a sense of ease Supporting my endeavours Soothing all my needs I need the rain and the sun To make my garden complete And if I see a rainbow I’ll remember what it meansWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: We should all remember what the rainbow means!. Lovely write Gideon!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's great, really!. I'm not a poetry buff, but I felt a sense of tranquility all through the poem!. I really liked the fourth line!. Had to read it more than once!. You have written that line describing the tree whereas I had been thinking of the line as a description of your dreams!. It takes a totally different meaning from that angle!. Very profound!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com How lovely! You really are in touch with nature!. A garden can bring such joy and solace!. I made the decision to share my garden with the local wildlife!. Yes, sometimes they cause a little trouble but nothing compares to seeing a little fawn nestled in behind a tree fern! I grew up in a very plain urban environment but I always tried to garden, even as a child!. Your poem made want to go stroll in the garden!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is so lovely!. And from my perspective at the moment of writing this answer - I've read it five times - it is as though it was written by Jesus to us!. I see it other ways, as well, but that is what came through for me!. Thanks for the stroll in the garden!. I think this provides a much needed stroll for many!. Posting this to the fridge if it's ok!. Thanks for the walk in the garden on this Q :)Www@QuestionHome@Com I was driving along in my red 1986 Toyota pickup!. There was a rainbow on the close horizon!. When I splashed a big puddle, the rainbow came in the open windows of my truck, making a complete circle, ending in my lap!. True story!.Www@QuestionHome@Com wow I liked it! I love the last lines "And if I see a rainbow I'll remember what it means" totally awesome poem!!=)Www@QuestionHome@Com I could see the tree, I could smell the flowers and feel the grass under my feet!. You did and excellent job describing your garden!.Www@QuestionHome@Com walking in poetry has always seemed to be as if one was taking inventory of the writers life or a particular situation,!.!. and the elaborating on the situation,!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Have you been visiting my garden again!?!? Soon the baby robins will be leaving the nest! It's miraculous how fast they grow!.!.!.!. This is lovely!Www@QuestionHome@Com Very soothing - thank you ;-)Www@QuestionHome@Com Very Nice and its wonderful to see someone on this site who can actually SPELL! Congrats to you!Www@QuestionHome@Com Brilliant, I hope you publish it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com beautiful drew me out of this poxy office to a sweeter place thank youWww@QuestionHome@Com Thats nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com Mother Earth speaks to us in myriad ways, when we use all our senses!. ~6~Www@QuestionHome@Com |