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Question: Is Van Helsing starting to sound like Rumpelstiltskin here!?
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“I am glad that you have found,”
The man who spoke, Lanett could see…
“this, the land of SaferGround,”
…it was the stranger who helped her flee
They took her in and showed her peace
a DarkPlace to sleep, heal from hurt
but all the world outside StillStalked
and she wished past would soon revert
An AncientClan, her father’s kin
descended from the Count himself
The blood lust slowly fallen back
now a MoreTrue sense of wealth
There they would hold back the clout
of VanHelsings evil sword
not sword of blade as VampireLords
but with barrel from which smoke pours
He would seek and find them soon
near the waxing of the MoonWww@QuestionHome@Com
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huh!.!.Well I don't really remember the story Rumpelstiltskin too well but from what I do this sounds nothing like Rumpelstiltskin!.!.!.I didn't read the other poems and perhaps i should before answering this but it does have a "Blue Blood" feel to it (It's a book about these rich families "old money" who are actually vampire clan) It's a horrid book in case you were wondering Paris Hilton meets Dracula!.!.!.Anyways It's not a bad poem!.!.!.!.if i weren't so lazy i would read the other ones but a 16 part series Le sigh I don't have the energyWww@QuestionHome@Com
Like i said to you before!.!.!.
i have a hard time understanding the topic!.
vampires and such are something ive never really gotten into and i dont know very much about them!.
the poems sound good but seriously!.!.!.
what do i know!.
i like your use of words and how everything flows together!.
maybe i should do my research and read them again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is a suspenseful and exciting part of the series, even with a moment of tranquil, healing rest for the lovely Lanett!. I don't see a trace of Rumplestiltskin here- he isn't sneaking in at all!. What I do find here is a wonderful, well-told story by a gifted poet!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
No it doesn't and it continues the story quite nicely!. I am looking for the next ones and I would love to read the book when it is done!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Keep on pushin' that pen hon, you're doing great!.!.!.I've gotta go back tho for prt 15!
Arugggggggggg
(been stuck in the barns most of the day lol)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Is he perusing or pursuing!? Or is he pursuing in Peru!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
If you hadn't said anything I would not have noticed!.!.!. do not worry hun, you are doing just fine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
No, no rumplestilskin flair here, at least not to my knowledge!. He is the character promised the first born child, but perhaps there is something more to this than meets the eye!. After all, what is in Lannet's blood different from most vampires!. What secrets does Van Helsing have about Wilhelmina Harker and her illicit affair with the Dark Master, Dracula!. One begins to wonder!. I really hope you can turn this into a book!. It would be great!. But, ask yourself this, why is Lannete so valuable!?Www@QuestionHome@Com