Read my poem!?

Question: Read my poem!!?

The road that I must turn back from
Every step leads me away from who I am

The miles of world I must thread upon
Changes the clothing, for where I belong

Every change takes me down
Another path I need to remember to turn around

To become such an imaginary thing
Built upon a soul that turned to stone

And when I finally reach the end
Miles behind towards the man i've been

Will I still belong in that life anymore
Or is my heart but a fallen starWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

WOW, U HAVE A GOOD SENSE IN DIFFERENCIATING THE INNER & MATERIALISTIC WORLD, BUT INEVITABLY, WE ARE USED IN BEING IN MATERIALISTIC WORLD, AVOIDING THE VOICE OF INNER WORLD WHICH IS PRESENT IN SELF
GOOD WORKWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is a really nice poem! Not only does it sound pretty, it also has a meaning of changing yourself! i love it :)
i like the ending which is one of the most important parts, but "To become such an imaginary thing
Built upon a soul that turned to stone" i dont really understand it!. try to make it more clear or change it to something more related to the rest of the poem!.
but, really, this is a really great poem! its really movingWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like the way it flows!.!.!.your poem is great!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com