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I was looking at her
When you approached
You were searching
To break my heart

Into a billion sharp
Ravor blade points
And shatter past promises
Into shards of glass

Each piercing deeper
Into my skin
Each a dark reminder
Of what you did

I don’t really understand
But I can take a hint
You move to quick
To stop and think

You’re a selfish
Backstabbing liar
A sweet sensitive rose
Covered in thorns


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There are sharp conflicting emotions in your poem, which is the same as it is in life!. Very good expression of these feelings!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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try to bring it together, condense the length and go for width!.Www@QuestionHome@Com