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Question: Is there an old poems home where this one could be more comfortable!?
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Puree of Hot Dog, Apple Pie and Chevrolet
by TD Euwaite

Like, my feet fell in molasses, molasses,
I read, The Times without glasses, glasses!.
Getting old, chaps our asses, asses,
As the gaseous cloud, it passes, passes!.
Sit here quiet, eat my oatmeal, oatmeal,
Accept, the truth of this, damn dumb deal, damn dumb deal!.

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It's tough visiting, seeing remnants of vitality and sensing your future!. Graywhite (one word) is the color that comes to mind!. Oatmeal is not to far off from that!. Retype in large print and post under the oatmeal box!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this repetition! An auld lang syne home!.!.!.!.a library, dusty, musty repository of dust and must!.!.!.shake, shake, shake!.!.!.shake your bookey!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very clever! I prefer the pureed corned beef on rye with a bit of pureed coleslaw on the side!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well, it's easy to chew!.

Books are the best old poems' homes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Poem is not bad but the name!?Www@QuestionHome@Com