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"me"

Hard to find,
the real me!.
Italian is the trunk
of my tree!.
Many different
bloodlines!.
So many hide
in me!.
Irish, French,
Indian, Dutch!.
Trying to pin
it down,
is just
way too much!.
One thing
that I know,
many bloods
do flow!.
From Spain
to Africa!.
I may not
look like you,
rest assured,
I am your brother!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I like it!. You spoke the truth of all of us!. The poem says it well enough!. We are all akin in so many ways!. Soul searching is good in poetry or otherwise, so long as we move on!. Edit!. I have read over it several more times!. Don't change anything!. It is written well!. A great poem like it is!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds like you are doing a little soul searching!. Whatever blood runs through your veins, it is red, it is what is in your heart that matters!. The thoughts in your mind, the feelings inside, your soul!. That's what makes you who you are!. Tha poem is nice too, thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

glad you have embraced your multi culturalism!.!.!.!.
I like the directness and factual display of the poem!.
clear, clean and precise!.!. it leaves nothing unturned for the reader!.!.!.
good on you!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the last line!. To me it says, No matter who or what you are, and no matter who or what i am, we are both humans, we are both brothers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think you gave a lot of thought when you were writting this!. I liked it very much!. I would, however, set it up a little differently, rather than line after line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

if you had to write this for school or something then i think its good
but if you just felt like writing about your 'bloodline'
id have to say
write about sunthin else
sorryWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like the sense in the poem,but it has no deffinite rhyme scheme!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i really like this!.!.!.!.!.it's a good poem for unity! it's very unique, and so true too! great work brother!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its ok 6/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

hey steve i really like this one!.!.!.!.!.we are all human beings!.!.!.!.!.!.love this idea!.!.!.!.!.100/100!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

my brother!?!? mmmm!.!. yes you areWww@QuestionHome@Com