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Question: You may like this for all you know!.!.!.please comment!?
I reworked on a poem i wrote last night and here it is

Im the woman


Im the strange wild fragrance that lingers
from hallucinations of your dreamy delights
I roam around,fly and glide ever so lightly
Along the dark path ways of your thoughts

I dissociate at the boundaries of your sanity
To unify as a dance before your half sleepy eyes
I bring you a spell of ecstasy one moment
Be long dark shadows of memories in the next,
haunting you in the guise of the reverberations
of the sound of an old lover's chilling voice
I take numberless forms!.!.!.as winged creatures,
as a Roman lass and of a cherubim girl once lost
I often visit you as elves and sylvan fairies
that play mysterious games with your fancies
I blossom as the dewy blue rose in your desires
A dainty doe that gallops through your grasp
Im the magic in your peace, sadness and thrills
I am everywhere,whether you see me or not
I am nothing but the sheer light fumes
of the undulating soul of all feminine formsWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
(mouth dropped) omg that was pefect !.!.wowWww@QuestionHome@Com

Good Poem!. Remember that you don't need to use so many big, descriptive words to guide the reader!. Sometimes, the simplest words say the most!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh wow I love it! The imagery is sooo beautiful!.!.!.!. One of my favorite I have read so far!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bravo! I LOVE it !Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pisces is a poet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice :]Www@QuestionHome@Com